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Sparks Fly
First signature I actually like in a while. Criticism would be nice.
BlazinFTW- Moderator
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Re: Sparks Fly
I'd at a bit of a motion blur coming out of each letter, and edit the space between the letters to about 3.0 (Only on the Sparks Fly part) And on the When I'm there, change the periods to "/"'s and get rid of the first period.... maybe lighten up the lightning... This is just my opinion, you can ignore it if you want
Re: Sparks Fly
It's ok, but it kind of lacks something. 4/10
KingK77- Admin
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Re: Sparks Fly
UD, what does it lack?
Cob, I'll try that right now.
EDIT: Motion blur is terrible.
Cob, I'll try that right now.
EDIT: Motion blur is terrible.
BlazinFTW- Moderator
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Re: Sparks Fly
The render doesn't really blend with the background too well, a bit too sharp. I'd suggest either blurring the edges a bit or placing a duplicate of the render behind itself and using motion blur on the back one.
Another thing is the text stands out a bit too much and draws attention from the focal point, try having it flow with your sig instead of it floating in space.
Overall 7/10, I'd say a good job.
Another thing is the text stands out a bit too much and draws attention from the focal point, try having it flow with your sig instead of it floating in space.
Overall 7/10, I'd say a good job.
Quail- Psychic
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Re: Sparks Fly
What I meant was, something similar to this
And I agree with Quail, make it flow more with it.
8/10
And I agree with Quail, make it flow more with it.
8/10
Re: Sparks Fly
Oh, that'll look real bad.
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