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Post by BlazinFTW on Tue May 04, 2010 9:14 pm



First signature I actually like in a while. Criticism would be nice.

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Re: Sparks Fly

Post by Cobthecobbler on Tue May 04, 2010 9:35 pm

I'd at a bit of a motion blur coming out of each letter, and edit the space between the letters to about 3.0 (Only on the Sparks Fly part) And on the When I'm there, change the periods to "/"'s and get rid of the first period.... maybe lighten up the lightning... This is just my opinion, you can ignore it if you want Very Happy

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Re: Sparks Fly

Post by KingK77 on Tue May 04, 2010 10:24 pm

It's ok, but it kind of lacks something. 4/10
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Post by BlazinFTW on Wed May 05, 2010 4:06 pm

UD, what does it lack?

Cob, I'll try that right now.

EDIT: Motion blur is terrible.

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Re: Sparks Fly

Post by Quail on Wed May 05, 2010 8:08 pm

The render doesn't really blend with the background too well, a bit too sharp. I'd suggest either blurring the edges a bit or placing a duplicate of the render behind itself and using motion blur on the back one.

Another thing is the text stands out a bit too much and draws attention from the focal point, try having it flow with your sig instead of it floating in space.

Overall 7/10, I'd say a good job.
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Post by Cobthecobbler on Wed May 05, 2010 9:04 pm

What I meant was, something similar to this

And I agree with Quail, make it flow more with it.
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Post by BlazinFTW on Wed May 05, 2010 9:13 pm

Oh, that'll look real bad.

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Re: Sparks Fly

Post by Cobthecobbler on Wed May 05, 2010 9:34 pm

Try it out, you never know

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